These are the notes I made in the lesson to make my post on the review of my test shoot
I talked with my group and we talked about our opinions on the test shoot
- is the plot clear
1. camera work
2. not that clear
3. costume
- what works well
1. it got the rough outline across
2. good location
- is it engaging
1. kills make the scene engaging
- has tension been created
1. sort of - hard to do
- what needs to be changed
1. costume
2. sound
3. camera work
4. order of shots
- is it 2 mins
1. it is 1:20
talk with teacher
we talked to our teacher after he watched the scene and he gave us feedback and suggestions
begining have struggle
1. crawl then death
reason for split up
see more preparing then guy
show her hunting
what else is she doing
1. reading tracks
2. bandaging
3. making weapon
hunters aren't hunting together
1. shows dog tags
2. bragging how many they have killed
struggle to kill the actor
how does little girl take out big man
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haven't decided the costume for the girls
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